Vika, it is nice, but a bit 'dry', as if it is a telegram. For example, your essay being published in a newspaper is interesting information. Why don't you add more detail? How did it happen? What was it about? Do you still contribute to newspapers? By the way, you forgot to mention the date you started school.
Vika, it is nice, but a bit 'dry', as if it is a telegram. For example, your essay being published in a newspaper is interesting information. Why don't you add more detail? How did it happen? What was it about? Do you still contribute to newspapers? By the way, you forgot to mention the date you started school.
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